COMMENT PLEASE !

Ring, Ring! "Come have a drink with us!" Rosie shouted into the phone.
"Let me close up the nursery, Ashley and Ashton just left."
"A drink" turned into six, then twelve. They all fall down.

UNDER CONSTRUCTION

Palm trees bursting with color swaying in the distance

Majestic mountains in the distance

Colors so astounding they make a rainbow blush

Roses, beautiful, yet consequential at the touch

The only darkness is the shadows that swiftly move with the outbursts of clouds

love this

heart palpitations


can you think of better words? no

Haiku Pieces

Dew drips off petals

Plummeting towards the ground with-

Out a single sound

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Mat you are a fool

People walk all over you

They are not 'welcome'

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Bitter cold turns your

Nose bright red, soon you

Will be leading Santa's sled

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Winter blossoms like

A flower bud arising

Through its new formed womb

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Snowflakes soar through the

Sky. They land on an eyelash

Their life comes to an end

The pencil

A chew toy
Who needs food when you can have the comfort of lead poisoning

Beautifully Imperfect

Preserve your identity. The world consumes your best, proven to remove flattering ambition. Who defines shape? Pear-shaped, petite, button-like? Drawn to the extraordinary circumkstance of botox. Are you prepared for all that follows, behind a pretty face? Are you ready to face the tough reality? And realize the captivating puntuality of not always being irresistible? Why not pump up the volume?! You will remain beautiful. You are your own astounding color

I need some help here

Here are a few lines I love but dont quite know just how and where to place them. If ya got any ideas, please share!

Unknown intelligence of a quiet heart is the eye of a storm filled with imperfect nothingness

Stranded lies buried beneath a broken sunset

She was breathing determination

Rosie-cheeked fright hides behind laughter

Abandoned intelligence finds itself in a grim mosaic casket

Music streams from the fingertips

Your feelinsg aside, sponge up other's