Here are a few lines I love but dont quite know just how and where to place them. If ya got any ideas, please share!
Unknown intelligence of a quiet heart is the eye of a storm filled with imperfect nothingness
Stranded lies buried beneath a broken sunset
She was breathing determination
Rosie-cheeked fright hides behind laughter
Abandoned intelligence finds itself in a grim mosaic casket
Music streams from the fingertips
Your feelinsg aside, sponge up other's
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i think you should write a seperate poem for each line... not a long poem, just something a little more than each line already says.
i loveeee she was breathing determination
i like your use of the phrase "buried a broken sun set"
the imagry in this peice is very good. and ty for the comment on my latest post it means alot :)
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